Spent the day editing with Ben and even though as Eddie says "I'd rather have 5 minutes of quality than 10 minutes of crap" we are barely at five minutes. That's the bad news the rest is mostly good. It flows much better now. We have several options for the tutorial tommorrow with David and Eddie. We tried to edit to the sugestions made in the screening though we just need to run a few things by them. We had thought about doing a reshoot before speaking to them but have postponed until after becuase we can then cater the reshoot to their feedback. Below is the options we can take to make the film better -
